Can anyone revise my english paper for me? its 2 pages, thanks.?

Question

you can write ur e-mail it, nd ill e-mail it 2 u

i dont ask any1 i know since they dont critic it they way it should, they let go and say its good, and i cant ask tthe teacher since its due the day after tomorrow and i dont have his class tomorrow,

Answer 1

Why don't you have a friend or a relative look at it and see what they think. You might also talk to the teacher and get hi/her opinion of the pare first.