poem anyone?

Question

Cut and bleed

Cut and bleed
To see my own blood is what I need
With one cut on my wrist, cut on my vein
I get temporary relief of my pain

Sometimes i need to see the blood trickle down my arm
The cuts help me escape all the harm
They make the pain and tears subside
I sometimes think of the beautiful word: Suicide

My razor blade, my friend
You always help me mend
When I feel all my world has shifted
You help the pain, sorrow, and guilt be lifted

With just one cut across my wrists
I feel myself finally begin to drift
So easy a solution to stop my eternal sorrow
I dont want to see the day of tommorow

I cut and cut with greed
To let the pain bleed out is what I need
Secretly, I pray for the courage to press it deep in my veins
So, I can once and for all permanently end my pain

i wrote this a few years ago...what do you think?

Answer 1

I think that you are a good writer, and even though I don't know what's causing your physical pain I would recommend consulting a Pain Management specialist if you haven't already. They have a number of treatments to offer to try and help pain, not all of them medications. Some of them are alternative treatments like massage therapy and accupuncture.