Some say you're just another person walking threw the earth, going where life takes you, a no one, someone with no impact in this world.. I say diffrent, You're Amazing, gorgeous, smart, funny.. I feel for you like no one before, and how you've effected me, You have left foot prints on my heart where others have walked threw without leaving evidence of stopping by. Wow, my feelings for you, I can't describe them, all I know is sometimes it feels good, and sometimes it's the worst pain you could ever feel.. I have this weird feeling from when I look into your eyes, It's kind of like i'm falling but not like off of something, You know what I mean if you are her..Oh, and your smile, It's truely an amazing site.. I can still see your smile, your eyes in my head from time to time, i'm glad i'm not forgetting you.. If it takes all i've got for you, then its gone..
You brighten my days on the worst ones possible, you know who you are..
2007-12-11 07:14:06 · 10 answers · asked by oakens123 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
thank you so much, but...you do need to work on your spelling and grammar!
threw = through
diffrent = different
effected = affected
weird feeling from when I look... = weird feeling when I look
kind of like = as if
not like off of = ?
truely = truly
you just need to say things more simply - the idea is good and the feeling is there, but tone it down a bit!...
2007-12-11 07:22:51 · answer #1 · answered by KYGrace 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice. Turn it into a song and sing it to a girl =).
2007-12-11 15:16:48 · answer #2 · answered by niiro13 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it came from your heart then yes it's good.
2007-12-11 15:16:42 · answer #3 · answered by drdennie2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow
2007-12-11 15:16:46 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwww this is sooo sweet. i wish someone would right somethin bout me like that. =] hehe....
2007-12-11 15:20:40 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What a put off, sad or what.
2007-12-11 15:17:22 · answer #6 · answered by Rick J 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was fantastic never read anything like it. and it isn't good itz better than good. well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-12-11 15:18:54 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's all good.
2007-12-11 15:17:01 · answer #8 · answered by Terra J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is fantastic :)
2007-12-11 15:17:42 · answer #9 · answered by ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What?????
2007-12-11 15:17:12 · answer #10 · answered by browndogzzz 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋