Everytime i close my eyes
I can feel you i feel you by my side
Never seen in you in my life
Yet your love i can feel inside
Everytime i see your smile
My black heart is filled light
I never felt anything like this
At that moment everything feels just right
Everytime i need you with me
You are always there in my mind
I barely even know you
But i promise you that you i will find
Evertime i hear you laughing
I feel like i've gone to heaven and back
The sound of your voice reassures me
And I know there is nothing i lack
Everytime i look into your eyes
My heart knows not to lie
I cannot bear to see your cry
My love for you will never die
I don't know why i love you so much
I don't know why i pine for you
I don't know why i always seek you
But i do know the you feel it too
All i want is to finally meet you
So i can share with you all of my life
In my arms i want to hold you and kiss you
I wish and pray that you and only you will always be my wife
2007-12-10 03:14:42 · 4 answers · asked by blackwingedangel9 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i dedicate this poem to all women that are working hard and trying their best to find true love! i wish you all the best and hey... whats this poem tell you about me.. i need feed back plz D:
2007-12-10 03:16:02 · update #1
Aww! That's so sweet. I hope you find your true love soon. You deserve to as happy as I am when I'm with my baby.
2007-12-10 03:31:48 · answer #1 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem tells me that you fall quick but has a unique lust for women. I love this poem it sounds similar to the kinds I have written.
2007-12-10 03:22:31 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOU ARE OF CREATIVE MIND AND HAS GOT OPULENT COMMAND OVER EXPRESSING YOUR VIEWS IN A POETIC BUT IMPRESSIVE WAY.YOUR EFFORT IS COMMENDABLE AS YOUR HEART LONGS FOR LOVE ,THE SUBLIME LOVE OF WOMEN.
2007-12-10 03:26:42 · answer #3 · answered by Maharaj K 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it is OK
2007-12-10 03:21:33 · answer #4 · answered by Rana 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋