I need to know the correct punctuation for this sentence please help me out....?

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My sister Renee who lives in Chicago Illinois will attend a two year college and major in communication technology.

2007-12-09 10:57:42 · 3 answers · asked by chris l 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages

My sister Renee, who lives in Chicago, Illinois; will attend a two year college and major in communication technology.

2007-12-09 11:08:11 · answer #1 · answered by maven 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋

My sister Renee, who lives in Chicago, Illinois, will attend a two year college and major in communication technology.

2007-12-09 19:00:49 · answer #2 · answered by Shizuka 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋

I would also put a comma after college.

2007-12-09 19:13:06 · answer #3 · answered by Debdeb 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋