this is my first song I ever wrote so it's not too good. It needs some work but it's my first shot. Let me know what you think.
PS If your gonna mean, don't comment on it.
Thxs[:
"I'm Not Alone"
I may not be the girl you like or want.
But that's okay because I don't want or need you.
I am not going to change for you because...
[Chrous:]
I'm not alone, many people are just like me.
If you try looking for another girl, make sure she's not like me.
Oh yeah, cuz I'm not alone.
When you see me, you act like I'm the only one who acts just like me.
But if you can tell, I am just like other people you'll meet,
and you will see...
Chrous repeat
Maybe I am alone, but right now...
I'm not alone, many people are just like me.
If you try looking for another girl, make sure she's not like me.
Oh yeah, cuz I'm not alone.
No, no. no.... I'm not alone.
Not alone.
No... I'm not alone.
2007-12-07 13:48:39 · 12 answers · asked by WiLD504 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Uhm, didn't I said postitive thoughts and ideas? Not negative...
2007-12-07 13:53:23 · update #1
Encouragement song to all the girls who do not need a guy to make them feel special, because they are happy with who they are.
2007-12-07 13:58:17 · answer #1 · answered by sky 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah its ok u know the meaning of it was really good but there is no kind of rhythm to it writting songs are like writing poems they have to have rhythm
2007-12-07 21:52:01 · answer #2 · answered by i<3music 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are alone, cus you are not going to the next round
2007-12-07 21:52:22 · answer #3 · answered by witnessprotectionprogram 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really need to hear it to know if its good. its one thing to read the words and another to hear it..
Try it out on someone you can sing it to
Good luck
2007-12-07 21:51:58 · answer #4 · answered by Brian V 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its okay, but there are some lines that dont make any sense and repeat themselves, but it is good for a first try
2007-12-07 21:57:25 · answer #5 · answered by sunny 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good to me and i can totally relate to that!!! i totally agree w/ya!!! but yeah great song!, u get a thumbs up from me! =)
2007-12-07 21:55:41 · answer #6 · answered by Cassie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's too repetitive.
2007-12-07 21:52:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. This is yahoo answers not yahoo star search.
2007-12-07 21:50:37 · answer #8 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋
awesome
2007-12-07 21:51:25 · answer #9 · answered by Ali 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good. i like its okayy.
2007-12-07 21:52:57 · answer #10 · answered by Jaide 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋