Someone once said to me...
Five years from now i will not know you
Who you were i will remember
who you become i cannot predict
Who you become is up to you
Follow your dreams, make things happy, create a path and lead the way...
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We are the present we created the past, now all we have to do is figure out the future
2007-12-06 08:49:50 · 4 answers · asked by thatgirlyouknow 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
It is a quite marc g i am not quotting someone else i wrote the quote. i added that part someone once said to me because it sounded better that way
2007-12-06 10:49:49 · update #1
im sry about that part. What i meant to say was
follow your dreams make things HAPPEN, lead the way...lol not happy
2007-12-06 10:52:14 · update #2
I think the sentiments are worthy. That said, I think you need to edit/rewrite them a tad.
Frankly, I think the last sentence could be used by itself with a little editing:
"Follow your deams -- forge a path and lead the way."
Of course, it is very much like a line by a famous writer:
“Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.” ~~Ralph Waldo Emerson
2007-12-06 09:02:18 · answer #1 · answered by Beach Saint 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Although your not quoting it's a interesting piece of writing.
2007-12-06 16:58:48 · answer #2 · answered by George B 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very Good
2007-12-06 16:57:15 · answer #3 · answered by cochise 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That isn't a quote...to quote is a verb...an action... you quoting someone else's text, words, etc...
If I copy what you wrote and put your name under it, I am Quoting you. What I am quoting is your words. They're still your words.
In either case... the text is nice and well written. I may quote you one day. :)
2007-12-06 16:55:22 · answer #4 · answered by Marc G 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋