I was asked to re-write and post the ending by my kid since she knows that I really didn't like the end of the series. Anyhow, I whipped this up in about 2 minutes. What do you think? Here goes: With that one moment--that one flash of eye blinding light that shone brighter than the sun it was
over. Voldemort was no more. A calm slowly began to befall Hogswarts. And then realization
that Harry, Harry Potter too was gone. All that he was. All that power within him, the power of
love his mother had bestowed upon him with her courage was not enough. In the end, Harry had
to draw everything within his own heart. And like the valiant warrior that he was, he used up all
that he had for the love of his friends. Sadly their faces began to show the realization of what
had happened. In tears Hermione and Ron held onto one another. Their friend was gone and
nothing would ever bring him back. Still, they knew that he would not have wanted it any other
way, after all, his sacrifice had freed the world.
2007-12-04 15:23:22 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Good. Wraps it up well and with good detail.
2007-12-08 13:29:21 · answer #1 · answered by BluhBluh 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked Rowling's ending better. It was more consistent with the characters she'd been writing about all along.
Ok, were you supposed to rewrite the ending "in your own words"? Or were you supposed to create and rewrite an entirely different ending?
I don't buy the "kid" thing... sounds more like a homework assignment to me.
Either way, if this is a rewrite of the ending in your own words, you obviously have not read the book. If this is the creation of a new ending, I stand by my initial answer... Rowling's ending was more consistent with the personalities of the characters she had been writing about all along.
2007-12-04 15:29:02 · answer #2 · answered by scruffycat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it needs some commas/grammar work but it has a great overall meaning. its a little concise and vague, more detail would make the story richer but some good revising would fix that.
nice job! ^_^
hope this helps
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2007-12-04 15:30:28 · answer #3 · answered by Liquid♥Onyx 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cool. I thought you were going to rewrite the epilogue, that was a terrible part. It was too predictable, it didn't seem like Rowling put any time into that part.
2007-12-04 15:27:46 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
awww.. so sad but ur ending would be more welcomed b4 the Boss wrote hers.
2007-12-07 00:54:58 · answer #5 · answered by Emma W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
he dies? how sad. but in a way much more artistic. nice writing.
2007-12-04 15:28:46 · answer #6 · answered by ME 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
toooooo long
2007-12-04 15:26:37 · answer #7 · answered by jenet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it xD
2007-12-04 15:54:09 · answer #8 · answered by aznstich 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its well done...*claps*
2007-12-04 15:27:32 · answer #9 · answered by ¿Curious? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋