hey all what do you think of this poem, rated 1 being the lowest 10 the highest.
Its so strange waking up not knowing who you are
its so hard starting over when you've come so far
at times i hate you for making me leave
i wish you could have been better, done all the things i need
but there was only room for you not enough for two
i held on to the hope you would pen your eyes to see
all you had in me
i gave up things i loved just to see you happy
becuase then you were worth it
you see now what you've lost
i see now what all those years cost
moving on is never easy and with you gone leaves me empty
but id rather be alone then taken advange of
rather then hearing your accusation, not trusting every move you made
your sorry now but i'm not
leaving the life i new behind was the best thing i could do
and i will never forget all that i learned from you
2007-12-04 08:33:36 · 6 answers · asked by *Lovely 2* 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
ignore any spelling mistakes please
2007-12-04 08:34:09 · update #1
its about a ex lover
2007-12-04 08:41:11 · update #2
wow. thats all i got to say.. OH YEAH and a 8 nd a half :).....good job!
2007-12-04 08:37:32 · answer #1 · answered by mica! mica mica 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8/10
2007-12-04 16:36:37 · answer #2 · answered by Bandit! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8 out of 10 very nice*
2007-12-04 16:38:49 · answer #3 · answered by Penny Mae 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 if for a previous lover, 1 if for a child without a parent.
2007-12-04 16:38:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8, I really like it.
2007-12-04 16:37:31 · answer #5 · answered by Deborah S 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 :]
it's amazing â¥
2007-12-04 16:41:12 · answer #6 · answered by miiia.xo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋