u guys
r my best friends
thru thick and thin
we always stick together
i luv u guys
(it's like a haiku but with irregular meter)
2007-12-04 06:55:21
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answered by Anonymous
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I vote consistency. Meaning, do not not if poor grammar was intention or lack of skill or what, Something like "He entered (into) his life, hell (brake) broke loose(d),.....he (see's) see his face, etc somebody's got issues(needs help) etc. etc. Yeah, agree with somebody else, can't tell if "he" is the same person or sum bum of the streetsor what. Clarification would help.. Because, how one does enter his own life, as if he was not today, yesterday, or ever?Since i helped you maybe some person help me on mine.. its titled... My Satchel My satchel is soft. It houses two balls inside of it, Of which I am able play my favorite game. I never leave the house without it, Seemingly sometimes attached to my person. I wash my satchel every day. It always finds dirt from the street Whenst I play my favorite game. I love my satchel and my two balls. Last week somebody thieved both of my balls. Sad as I can no longer my favorite game Or with my balls The end :( Its a Haiku... What do you all think?
2016-04-07 08:23:55
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answered by Anonymous
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A short friendship poem (perfect for Friendship Day)
Choose friends wisely, the portrait they paint
Is who you are and who you ain't.
Friendship is life's great support
When friends are of the right sort.
For all your dreams do they make room,
Or bring you down with doom and gloom?
You will know a friendship is true
When it brings out the best in you.
2007-12-04 06:58:00
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answered by jet-set 7
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I have a friend, his name is Fred
He always seems at ease
'Cos Fred's a mouse in my garden shed
Who I feed with lots of cheese!
We often chat about this and that
And while away the time
To the annoyance of next door's Tabby Cat
Who's no friend of Fred, or mine!
2007-12-04 07:16:20
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answered by Anonymous
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Friends forever,
you've been a good friend to me
we'll always have eachother
just wait and see!
Lol. Good luck!
2007-12-04 09:27:50
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answered by mintlace34 4
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Mini you
Maxi me
Together forever
We will always be
Though you're small
And I'm real tall
I don't look down on you
At all, at all.
Mini you
Maxi me
You want a stool to stand on?
2007-12-04 06:57:11
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answered by Stuart 7
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You support me when the sky is grey,
You lift me up and lighten my day.
You have a friend thats forever true,
Who is honoured to have a friend like you.
2007-12-04 07:46:51
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answered by Tam 3
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Is that a poem for knee-highs? Here ye go -
I am big
You are small
Together we will have a ball
2007-12-04 07:40:50
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answered by boo 1001 1
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maybe you would like to check this site out for more ideas.
http://www.indianchild.com/friends_forever.htm
2007-12-04 06:56:23
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answered by snafu 7
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a friend with weed is a Friend indeed
2007-12-04 06:54:51
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answered by smilingontime 6
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