one it come to you
and what that day is
the day you say everything is good
for me
so one person starts in
you just tell them your done
so this is what i said to one each day
2007-12-04 02:07:20 · 9 answers · asked by Jake the Great 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
you can call me names
but when u hurt me
i am through
2007-12-04 02:22:01 · update #1
Very different. It shows it comes from the heart. You go Jake, It's nice. Keep up the good work.
2007-12-04 04:55:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
To start the day off on the right note,
I like to take time to promote
My poetry of all good stuff,
Online, on Answers, where the critics are tough.
So, good friend, today's the day
I return the favor and will flat-out say
Your poem is weak and makes my morn'
bland and bleak and rather bor'n.
2007-12-04 10:14:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
very nice
2007-12-04 13:50:32 · answer #3 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe it's me, but I just don't get it.
2007-12-04 10:37:29 · answer #4 · answered by Lollie 123 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good
2007-12-04 10:10:18 · answer #5 · answered by irish_matt 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good job :)
2007-12-04 10:20:28 · answer #6 · answered by Essie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice..
2007-12-04 10:09:58 · answer #7 · answered by Uncle Tom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
UM.....SURE. ;)
2007-12-04 10:19:35 · answer #8 · answered by feistyariesbitch 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thanks
2007-12-04 10:10:01 · answer #9 · answered by jenet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋