any topic sugestions
a poem or a paper (paper can only be 3 pages)
2007-12-04 01:41:09 · 4 answers · asked by Atomic Dolphin 2 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
this is what I wrote
True Beauty,
Yea right
The Media tells us what to wear, how to look
And if you want to be popular then put down that book
If you are starving your self it is ok you will loose weight
And if you eat more then one bite you’re a disgrace
We compare ourselves to those models you see
Who are paper thin and are always seen
You think that you are fat and starve your self more
And just once you go a little too far
You are found face down on the floor
True beauty is found not on the outside but within
Trust your inner self and true beauty you will win
2007-12-04 02:02:31 · update #1
Write about the early travelers who traveled west from places in the east. Most of them used covered wagons pulled by oxen. They suffered so much to make the trip, and there's so many interesting stories to be told, and the net is a good place to start.
2007-12-04 02:28:36 · answer #1 · answered by sparks 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all i really love your poem. I have printed it out and put beside it your name. And to let you know how i know one of my poems is being published as we speak. So i should know but anyways... i think you could stick with the poem and to make it bettter add more to it. I got one question if you are in 7th grade why are you on here but if you need any help any further email me @ vaderslittlegirl@yahoo.com and as the subject put my poem
2007-12-04 10:09:02 · answer #2 · answered by vaderslittlegirl 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
write about your favorite holiday
favorite holiday
favorite memory
2007-12-04 09:47:47 · answer #3 · answered by kleighs mommy 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your poem is really good.I like it.
2007-12-04 16:12:15 · answer #4 · answered by princess 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋