Here are some photos which I took recently for critique. Please be honest and suggest ways to improve... Also your favourite and the most horrible of the lot. Thanks.
1) http://www.flickr.com/photos/20118372@N07/2086280346/
2)http://www.flickr.com/photos/20118372@N07/2085489713/in/photostream/
3) http://www.flickr.com/photos/20118372@N07/2085478659/in/photostream/
4) http://www.flickr.com/photos/20118372@N07/2073105287/in/photostream/
2007-12-03 23:52:27 · 7 answers · asked by travel 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Visual Arts ➔ Photography
nice signs of "sensitivity" developing, pleasing images, keep working at view points and compositions, very pleasing progress
thanks for sharing
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2007-12-04 08:46:51 · answer #1 · answered by Antoni 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Those are very good; favorite (no U needed here) was the escalators. I would like to see that same shot w/ a long exposure: blur the people...... probably require a weird tripod setup that the mall wouldn't let you do.
You have a great eye for cool shots, so keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.
PS... a cool effect I like is to make part of the picture B&W, and keep some in color. If you don't know how to do it, post a question here and Pooky will help ya out.
2007-12-04 10:58:52 · answer #2 · answered by Trogdor the Burninator 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#1 would be improved if you did not cut the nose off the fish in the first row and had a bit more DOF
#2 Needs a faster shutter speed
#3 is perfect just as it is
#4 really holds no interest and is a tad crooked. I do like the sepia with the subject.
In general, all are nice.
2007-12-04 08:03:03 · answer #3 · answered by Perki88 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
FISH
I love it! The ice the color of black and white. it’s a great picture and it shows amazing angels of fish and great texture! WOW!!!
Best picture so far that you have posted!!!!
ESCALATORS
This picture I could see hanging on a wall of some business…it shows life busy life and how different things are. I am happy your not scared to try new angels and levels with your photography. This one is good!
WAVES
Great art I could see this more as a painting then a portrait!
SEWING MACHINE
Eeehh this is not my fav. I would have liked to see more of the wheel. All of the wheel. And maybe blur the back ground so you don’t see the door or shoot from a diff side.
2007-12-04 10:01:41 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The sewing machine shot doesn't do much for me, but it's more subject than capture. ( it's sharp, well exposed )
The interior shots are great, very nice work. Perhaps a bit higher shutter speed for the one w/ the escalators...
I'm not big on fish, and although I like the concept, there are "hot spots" from the lights overhead on most of them. Still, a good capture, as subject matter is highly subjective...
Good work, good luck and keep shooting !!!
2007-12-04 09:27:25 · answer #5 · answered by J-MaN 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I actually liked them 1-4 in that order....
2007-12-04 07:57:35 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
in order : waves,escalators,the machine and last very last the fish.
2007-12-04 16:20:41 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋