You say you're getting nervous,
I try to understand,
But all I'm getting worried,
Is if you only want to be my friend.
I hope your feelings didn't change,
I don't want you to leave me,
If it something I did,
Will you please forgive me?
You are my baby,
My only girl,
I wish I knew,
What's going on.
You say you don't know,
But I believe you do,
So tell the the truth,
And hopefully we're not through.
2007-12-01 12:19:39 · 7 answers · asked by 14 year old chick 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Very good!!!! Keep at it honey, you have a lot of potential. Poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself.
2007-12-01 12:24:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good! It actually sounds like what a guy i know was probably thinking about me a couple of weeks ago... If he would have done what you are apparently doing; expressing his feelings... he might have had a better chance with me.
Good Luck and God Bless
2007-12-01 20:28:36 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
gobbledygook...
poems are not outpourings of feelings but rather like a snapshot but instead using words.
why don't you try to paint the situation like you are an outsider taking a picture, and then see how it goes.
2007-12-01 20:24:41 · answer #3 · answered by art_flood 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Give it to the person you wrote it for, I think they might appreciate it. You have a similar style to mine.
2007-12-01 20:23:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really good. I think it was supposed to be Is it something i did not if it something i did
2007-12-01 20:23:34 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww thats so cute
im like almost crying
you have talent
2007-12-01 20:24:12 · answer #6 · answered by dramaqueen..† 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uh -uh give it to your gf see what she thinks
2007-12-01 20:28:18 · answer #7 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋