its about my closest friends and all the things we dont say to each other each verse is abour a different friend except the last one is about everyone
pls dont be rude jst honest thanx
Crying around corners
Sitting all alone
Asking advice
Life unknown
Can’t you see?
Everybody wants you
They don’t want me
Broken promises
Broken hearts
Never good enough
To be the star
Wanted fame
Never got anywhere
Except blame
Cover your body
All up in shame
Hide your bruises
Hide your pain
We can see through your eyes
Something not right
They way they beat you late at night
Know what to say
Strong as hell
A child’s voice
Captures all that is well
Mind tricks is what you know
Play them on all
And blame us for your sorrow
Families not perfect
Messes with you
Inside you’re just as sad
Pieces of a puzzle
All fit together
Everyone messes with each other
Whispers and gossip
Is how true friends speak
Backstabbing just another treat
Lies is all we know
Somehow it works
For now
Well just cover up all the sorrow
2007-11-29 23:00:22 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i think it sure sounds nice, truthful yet not hurtful, frank but not mean
you sure win my vote if it went on competition :]
2007-11-29 23:06:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
It felt relate-able, sometimes there's things you just can't say to friends no matter how close you are.
I also liked that it rhymed with out feeling like you tried too hard.
btw, I think she wanted to know what you thought about the heart of it, not how she spelled.
hello people, free style.
2007-11-29 23:06:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
One word: Intense
2007-11-29 23:05:28 · answer #3 · answered by elizaday83 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope your life isn`t really all that depressing, but if it is, I would talk to someone about it before you become desperate enough to do yourself harm.
2007-11-29 23:07:42 · answer #4 · answered by jms043 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it really moved something inside me. somehow, it fits to my life too. it almost seems that this is about me........
and i'm very honest , trust me.
thanks!!
2007-11-29 23:13:32 · answer #5 · answered by kiki 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
U are so cool~ sound like sad.
2007-11-29 23:06:29 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
its a good poem, but its all over the place and hard to follow
2007-11-29 23:05:51 · answer #7 · answered by mon mon 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋