Mother was hoping to privide more opportunity for Brother to get his education and she thought he is going to have a bright future if he is in the USA.
Mother's plan was to stay long enough in America until Brother have a proper place to live and study, then she wuld bring me back to our homeland to continue her small businesswith her because she thought i would fail, then i would not have any better furture then go back.
I know the last sentence is very long, but as long as it's a proper english I do not care. Please correct any spelling error, punuation, and grammar. If you need to break the sentence in wo, please do so.
2007-11-29 16:10:04 · 7 answers · asked by OMG 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Mother was hoping to provide more opportunity for Brother to get his education and she thought he is going to have a bright future if he is in USA.
Mother's plan was to stay long enough in America until Brother have a proper place to live and study, then she would bring me back to our homeland to continue her small business with her because she thought i would fail, then i would not have any better furture then to go back.
2007-11-29 16:13:49 · answer #1 · answered by gnana 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Mother was hoping to privide a better opportunity for Brother to get his education, and she thought he would have a bright future if he were in the USA.
Mother's plan was to stay in America long enough for Brother to have a proper place to live and study, and then to bring me back to our homeland so I could continue her small business with her, because she thought i would fail. This way, I would not have a better furture and go back.
I'm not sure if I understood the end of the last sentence correctly! It was a bit unclear to me.
2007-11-29 16:24:43 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My mother has a double-minor in English, so let me see if I cant give this a shot, OK?
My mother was hoping to provide a better opportunity for my brother, "so and so", in his education. She thought he was going to have a bright future if he were to stay in the United States of America. My mother's plan was to stay long enough here, in the U.S.A. until my brother has a proper place to stay and safely study, then she would bring me back to out homeland, "such and such", to continue her small business with her, because she thought I would fail. Then I would not have a better future. In an end result, I would eventually have to go back.
Hope that helps! Good luck.
2007-11-29 16:27:24 · answer #3 · answered by earthball50@sbcglobal.net 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My mother was hoping to provide more opportunity for my brother to get an education. She thought he would have a bright future if he went to the USA.
Mother's plan was for us to stay in America until my brother had a proper place to live and study. Then she and I would return to our homeland and continue working at her small business.
The problem with the last sentence is too serious for me to be able to correct it, because I cannot figure out what you are trying to say. It does not make any sense.
....because she thought I would fail (??? fail at what?, at studying in America? at working in the small business?) ....then I would not have any better future then go back (you have to make this clearer)
Perhaps you meant: My mother made this plan because she thought I would not succeed in getting an education and so would not have a better future when I returned home.
Wish I could help more. I do suggest that you try making your sentences a bit shorter and make your references clear.
2007-11-29 16:24:32 · answer #4 · answered by treebird 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
My mother was hoping to privide a better opportunity for my brother to get his education; she thought he could have a bright future in the USA.
My mother's plan was to stay in America long enough to find my brother a proper place to live and study, then she and I would return to our homeland to continue her small business. She thought I would fail and would eventually return to the homeland empty-handed.
2007-11-29 16:22:21 · answer #5 · answered by Lauren P 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My mother was hoping to provide more opportunity for my brother to get his education and thought he would have a bright future if he was in the USA.
Her plan was to stay in the United States until he had a proper place to live and study, then she and I would return to her small business in our homeland.
2007-11-29 16:22:21 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
unless Brother is a proper name it is not a capital, brother, your I's should be capitals. in America until brother has, not have. space between business with. I would fail. not, Then I would not have any better future to go back to.
2007-11-29 16:20:23 · answer #7 · answered by ruth4526 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋