How Should I Start My Sentence?

Question

I have to write a rough draft for science fair.
My project is: Do violent video games affect blood pressure?

How should I start my first sentence? It has to grab your attention. Also: what should I include in the draft? I'm going to talk about video games, other statistics and studies, heart rate, and effects. What else should I include?

Answer 1

How about an opening something to the effect
"RESEARCHERS HAVE PROVEN THAT A MEASURABLE PHYSIOLOGICAL RELATIONSHIP EXISTS BETWEEN VIOLENT VIDEO GAMES AND THE GAMER."
Then ask your question as your thesis statement.

good luck

Answer 2

Now... you could start with...
"Do you like video games?"
This is bound to catch the attention of most of the readers. You can start with something about video games which would get the readers to continue reading. Then gradually shift to the negative aspects you want to convey. this way you will make more of an impact than directly jumping into the harmful effects of video games.
Coming to the draft as such, in addition to the harmful effects on health you could also add a thing or two about censorship issues such as the depiction of graphic violence, obscenity, advergaming (a form of advertising in games), consumption of drugs, consumption of alcohol or tobacco, propaganda, or profanity in some games and so on.
I'm sure you could make a great impact with your presentation.
Good Luck!!

Answer 3

A question or profound out-come statement that fits the content of your event, speech or writing.

Like if you are going to perform metered blood tests on viewing subjects of violent video games, you could work this opening toward what the subject expects to find out. Or, to challenge the subject to wanting to try the experiment.

"You may well F E EL the effects of the violent video games you play."

"Can violent video games cause you a heart attach while window shopping?"

"You may need extra health insurance if playing violent video games."

"Call the doctor, Hun, Junior's getting ready to play 'Call of Duty'" ....

Playing "Doom" around Grandpa might increase his chances of a heart attach. ...

Recording the various results of participants to validate findings / claims. Compatible chart of cardiovascular charts on heart attach / blood pressure ranges.

Essentially, write as you talk. Once you have the research and basic outline. Try just speaking your thoughts on it and start from there.

Jazz it up, as long as the product is valid, your expression extend to make it interesting to others.

Good luck....

Answer 4

There are several pros and cons of having a billion dollars. The topic sentence really only needs to let the reader know what they'll be reading about. PS... dont start a paper with a question. Start with a sentence.

Answer 5

Um....

Does Violent Video Games affect the heart rate? If so How much?

Answer 6

Parents everywhere are beginning to complain that their blood pressure and heart rate go up when their kids play violent video games.

Answer 7

You should start out by stating your hypotheses and you should include the rating of the video games. You should also talk about a persons normal heart rate of a child and adult.

Answer 8

Have you ever thought about what video games can do to your blood pressure? Probably not. That's why I'm going to explain.

Answer 9

Kids these days play too much videos game, but they do not understand the harmful side effects to health it causes or

Too much kids play video game, but do not know how dangerous it is to their health

Has anyone ever though how harmful video games can be?

Answer 10

"Ever wondered that violent video games can be effective to blood pressure, I will tell you why it can be effective in many ways."