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The Samurai
“I'm silent in the dark" the Samurai had me warned.
"I'll sneak up behind you, soon you will be mourned.
I understand your movements and hear what you say.
If think you can see me, then you are to be my next prey."
I would not travel lone at night, only with a friend.
I am coming to take you down, leaving ripples on your skin.
I can sneak my way from up your chest, and hit you with my knife.
I am the one who chooses, if you keep your life.
When I come to take you, you will not be asleep.
All it will take, is one last quick release

Bitter cold of night, I can feel your breath.
A shiver and your ready, battle with my death.
I will fight you any place, your sorrows are to drown.
Anywhere that I chose, I will cut you down.

The Samurai was standing-from across the street.
He was as quite as a mouse, at looking back up at me.
He edged closer, cold steel in his hand.
I flew through the distance, thinking of the pain.

2007-11-29 14:44:15 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Comics & Animation

The Samurai starts to chase, he bellows out at me.
"Stop your running yellow man, I'll do it quick and clean."
For if you saved your soul for Gabriel, you are soon to meet the king

Bitter cold of night, I can feel your breath.
A shiver and your ready, battle with my death.
I will fight you any place, your sorrows are to drown.
Anywhere that I chose, I will cut you down.

I now my breath is running low, I no more time to stall.
So, I net the fire poker laying on the wall.
My eyes light up so bright, to the vibrant glow.
And I prepared for his jaw, a highly branding blow.
I shove the fire to his mouth, I am sure it had to hurt.
Hit the Samurai in the face, I sent him to the dirt
My expressions turned to white, I now can feel my soul
Last thing that I remembered, is his steel was mighty cold

2007-11-29 14:44:24 · update #1

yes, I indeed poured alot of emotion in to writing this story. It is a tale of a man and his battle with his untimely death!

2007-11-29 14:52:54 · update #2

4 answers

The story was very interesting and I got right into it, too. Very emotional, as well. Good job with the writing.

2007-11-29 15:38:41 · answer #1 · answered by Roxas of Organization 13 7 · 0 0

Oh, not bad, but a little lonely. Anyway, I like it. It is deep in emotion. You agree with me?

2007-11-29 22:50:48 · answer #2 · answered by freshman 3 · 0 0

Yes, very interesting!
Samurai kills Japanese person turned Christian?

2007-11-30 04:24:46 · answer #3 · answered by Mary 6 · 0 0

ooohohohooo I tremble. thats good.

2007-11-29 22:46:40 · answer #4 · answered by Shannerbananer lol 1 · 0 0

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