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Question

Although it may be argued that there are a lack of similiarities between the novels, there is more evidence of similiarities between them. Independence, judgements of others, and a quest to find love justify the similiarities intervening the two novels.


...please read over this and fix it/ add words/take out words..just do whatever so it sounds better

Answer 1

Although it may be argued that there are few if any similarities between the novels, there are actually several: Independence, judgments of others, and a quest to find love are the major similarities between the two novels.

(I corrected a couple of misspelled words--"judgment" has only one E in American spelling, and "similarities" has only four I's, not five.)

Answer 2

It can be argued that there are major differences between the novels, but there are some similarities. Both novels contain themes of independence, judement, and a quest to find love.

Answer 3

change the "are lack of similarities" to "is a lack..." Also instead of saying "more evidence" you might want to say "there is supplementary evidence," or if you want something even more simple, you could say " there is greater evidence." Other than that sounds good!!