Different.
Get me out.
Out of this body.
Im to different.
Different isn't good.
Not in this town.
Everyone stares.
Stares at my difference.
Why.
I wish i were the same.
Same as everyone else.
Everyone is so pretty.
Prettier than me.
Smarter than me.
Better than me.
I'm a no one.
Nobody cares.
Because i'm different.
So...what do you think?
2007-11-29 13:10:14 · 5 answers · asked by Mahøgany 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I know i write poems differently but don't be mean....just tell me what i can change
2007-11-29 13:11:04 · update #1
I think thats really good and I like the from you used it makes it more attractive to the reader
2007-11-29 13:48:39 · answer #1 · answered by ace 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really good I thought.
2007-11-29 22:43:52 · answer #2 · answered by Hugs from Sugar bug 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
so-so.
the last line is most important
2007-11-30 19:38:49 · answer #3 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
floows really well.
2007-11-30 09:21:08 · answer #4 · answered by Isaac 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NICE
2007-11-29 22:05:52 · answer #5 · answered by Poet master 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋