Just Because
Just because you wouldn't see
your eyes can only cry
Just because you wouldn't say
your voice can only sigh
Just because you wouldn't listen
your ears ring with goodbye
Just because you wouldn't touch
your arms are now empty
Just because you wouldn't care
you can feel no joy
Just because you wouldn't help
you carry the weight alone
Just because you wouldn't give
your treasures have no worth
Just because you wouldn't love
your heart's forever cold
Just because you wouldn't share
You face death alone
Just because you wouldn't change
you've lost your soul forever
2007-11-29 12:45:18 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like it. It is easy to understand. It moved me. Keep writing.
2007-11-29 13:49:04 · answer #1 · answered by California Gal 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Just because you wouldn't decide
your choice of this is prudent.
You cannot shoe a running horse!
Brilliant rhythmical style.
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2007-11-29 23:06:25 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
repetitive, been done a million times, uninspired.
The worst thing is, it doesn't seem confused at all and my intellect is not needed for reading this. HUGE thumbs down
2007-11-29 21:54:47 · answer #3 · answered by Chara Pointshot 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋