No one is commenting on my poems and I am sad!
2007-11-29 09:12:35 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yeah I do. I right poems but I dont think there very good.
2007-11-29 09:18:23 · answer #1 · answered by Nosferatu 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Yes I do like poetry, one of my very own right here:
put links to your others
THE UNKNOWN
I want you more than I’ve ever wanted anyone before
But how can I get you to notice me, if you love some body more
Because when I see you with her, my heart begins to ache
Every time she makes you laugh, I think of my mistake
The mistake I made of loving a guy in which I hardly know
One who loves another, yet your feelings you never show
Though as you look upon her I see the yearning in your eyes
But every time this happens my heart fills with such despise
She makes the smile upon your lips form in such a way
And slowly my hopes and dreams of you crash and fade each day
It kills me to know that I can’t be the one to make you smile like her
Though everyday that passes without you makes my life a blur
You don’t like her for her mind or beauty so it must be her physique
But the constant hugging and playful hitting makes my heart feel weak
Going with your every move, while clinging on your arm
Looking at her it’s hard to see how you think of her as a charm
But if you love her, then perhaps there’s no way to intervene
You’ll keep on trying, like I do, until the day you’re seen
Because if I walked a million miles you still wouldn’t notice me
Though give her but a second to walk by and you’re already on one knee
I want you so bad but in your eyes I know I am unknown
For the girl you love is everything as she sits upon a throne
If I screamed your name I’m sure she would only scream it louder
Gave you all I have to give, and you’d still look at her and be prouder
I know I must give up someday, but I really don’t know how
So I guess I can wait a bit or at least just right now
Though I can’t wait forever, for if I did I could not see
For all your light would shine upon her and in the darkness, I would be
By: Beverly Hurd ©
2007-11-29 17:21:55 · answer #2 · answered by SO scrumdidlyumptious 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Yes I do, but the type of poetry I enjoy is normally not one for polite conversation and the Y!A trolls would have bruised their fingers reporting me for violations.
2007-11-30 04:11:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes...I contribute my poetry to my college's monthly newspaper. I hope to publish a book of my poetry someday.
2007-11-29 17:20:21 · answer #4 · answered by nobodyd 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
YES YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL SO U MUST BE ABLE TO WRITE BEAUTIFUL WORDS. share them with me sometime
2007-11-29 19:06:52 · answer #5 · answered by ~*Horny Devil*~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2007-11-29 17:18:06 · answer #6 · answered by migrainegirl1 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
kinda/sorta/not really
:D
2007-11-29 17:54:39 · answer #7 · answered by rivery 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its okay.
2007-11-29 17:20:41 · answer #8 · answered by vlad 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋