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....Eve And The Promise


Caffeine pot bleeping, leaves falling,
Chickens scratching, pines sighing...
OH GOD! ! NO! Not sunshine! ! ! !
You reneged! You promised Eve
No sunshine or mirrors before 10a.m!

So what if she had to swallow that bite
Of apple
To be able to speak... she agreed!
A promise is still a promise! ! !
Women...and mirrors...before 10a.m...
For US...THAT'S the sin!

Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com

2007-11-29 09:02:30 · 3 answers · asked by Elysabeth 7 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

3 answers

I liked it 6 out of 10. Most people I would give 0 out of 10, so you're on the right track!

2007-11-29 09:51:39 · answer #1 · answered by Chara Pointshot 4 · 0 0

I agree with JK-----neither. The "poem" is neither sacreligious, nor funny. It's just not worth very much, from any perspective.

2007-11-29 11:03:12 · answer #2 · answered by mrm 4 · 0 1

Neither

2007-11-29 09:15:19 · answer #3 · answered by J K 3 · 0 0

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