I feel the cold within?

Question

I 'm in my dark world I hold hate within my soul and it over takes me and with my pain I cut to feel something real
and my blood runs and I'm nothing but a feather blown in the wind to roam this dark road alone faithless ever more

tell me what you think about this poem

star me if its any good

Answer 1

That's pretty sad. A lonely person wrote that, and has given up all hope..........

Answer 2

It's kind of down. Are you feeling down?

reminds me of a conversation between Melissa Manchester and Floyd- the sax player.

M. Do you always play the blues, Floyd
F. Only when I'm down.
M. Are you down a lot.
F. Only when I play the blues.
M. Floyd, you are crazy.
F. I may be crazy, but you are beautiful.

Answer 3

I think it is awesome. I used to feel like that until my beautiful children came into this world. Now I truly have a reason to live and love.

Answer 4

The words are good and powerful, very nicely done. Keep writing but don't do any of those things in your poem.

Take care and good luck

Answer 5

Nice, but it is very similar to the song that goes, "The needle tears a hole". This is a common modern theme, I think.

Answer 6

Sounds to me as a person who has lost hope.

Answer 7

I like it it really expresses what people feel when they can't forgive someone & feel hate inside for it.

Answer 8

It sounds a little emo. Did you write this?

Answer 9

I love it. It's easy to read and has many great images.

Answer 10

Is very nice :) I love poem :)