A short poem....is this concise enough?

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Comet...

How can you have passed so close
That you left my world intact,
But devoid
Of life.

2007-11-29 00:31:27 · 3 answers · asked by Elysabeth 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

Wonderfully done- Concise, with powerful imagery that still leaves me with a sense of mystery. I love it.

2007-11-29 01:20:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋

I just lov eit...it could have so many meanings!!!

2007-11-29 09:04:09 · answer #2 · answered by hymy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

By birth

Father and

Mother...

By death

Wife

Sons and daughter...?

2007-11-29 10:42:14 · answer #3 · answered by otteri selvakumar 2 · 1⤊ 3⤋