I've made a sentence and wanna check whether it works.
"My total neutrality grants spotted leaves a fall of its own——with no ceremony,nor portent." Please comment
2007-11-27 22:31:27 · 7 answers · asked by photosynthesis 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
The original version by Sylvia Plath is"
I let spotted leaves fall as they fall
without ceremony, or portent. "
2007-11-29 12:33:11 · update #1
It doesn't make sense if that's what you mean.
2007-11-27 22:36:06 · answer #1 · answered by †®€Åç∫€ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its gobbledy-gooook. Nonsense and makes no sense what so ever.
I am all for the PLAIN ENGLISH campaign! Call a spade a spade! You are trying to be far too clever for your own good at the detriment of making any sense.
2007-11-28 07:33:26 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm too out there, you didn't reach me nor have a hidden meaning behind the words.
Use simpler words but with double meaning this might shake a few leaves.
2007-11-28 06:54:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I thinks so. I think you mean that fall is beautiful and occurs naturally on its own.
2007-11-28 13:50:12 · answer #4 · answered by Big Bear 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds to me like a requiem for your apathy ;)
2007-11-28 06:39:46 · answer #5 · answered by AmaZins 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
shallow in belief you are.
2007-11-28 06:36:22 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
i dont get it!?
2007-11-28 06:49:15 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋