As soon as he spoke those three words
I didn't believe my ears
I never thought we’d feel alike
Looking with his hopeful eyes
He waited long for my reply
Standing there in front of me
With his marvelous faith filled grin
Here’s the best day of my life
I left my spot and hugged him tight
When at last I found my voice
I whispered in his perfect ear
“I love yoyos too”
2007-11-27 13:59:16 · 19 answers · asked by acamn91 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
luv it! im looking at a future poem writer who likes to take a dramatic humorous twist at the end
2007-11-27 14:03:03 · answer #1 · answered by xoxopinkcrush 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was totally lame. What do you love about yoyos? What does faith have to do with a yoyo?
2007-11-27 14:05:35 · answer #2 · answered by byrdsfan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ha ha. That's cute :)
Reminds me of a few poems I've written.
And the end is hillarious. Kudos.
2007-11-27 14:04:48 · answer #3 · answered by Kaydence 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love. But the YOYOS part you need to change. it is still great though.
2007-11-27 14:06:25 · answer #4 · answered by Jade/Alexis 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol! Cute! I totally didn't expect the ending! Two thumbs up!
2007-11-27 14:03:39 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well that is a bit of a twist, but quite well put together, hee hee
2007-11-27 14:03:51 · answer #6 · answered by fuzzykitty 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cute and funny!
2007-11-27 14:02:44 · answer #7 · answered by mE1hOtMa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Strange, but interesting!
2007-11-27 14:02:35 · answer #8 · answered by Renaye 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOVES IT!! LOL. ITS NOT LIKE OTHA POEMS WHERE IT IS LIKE I LOVE YOU 2 OR THE SAME **** OVER AND OVER AGAIN...IT MAKES YOU THINK IT SAYS I LOVE YOU 2 BUT THEN IT CHANGES LOL
2007-11-27 14:16:41 · answer #9 · answered by jenny_b2007 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute
2007-11-27 14:03:47 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋