Please offer criticisms of these chewy little haikus
Cow wets in the grass
The chicken laughs at his feet
High by Potatoes
Swallowing the blade
Forgetting I forgot
My wife was afraid
Remember Jesus
All the stupid pharisees
Crying for a throne
Dismal in context
Is complex and rasberry
In the skin of tarts
Midnight animals
Bouncing all upon my lung
In diamonds and shoes
I know you so much
I haven’t seen you before
Please don't decompose
Here are the liars
We’ve got a new song for you
It is old and false
I did not write these by myself. I had the help of an acclaimed artist who requested to remain anonymous.
2007-11-27 13:40:06 · 5 answers · asked by Harry Lillis 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Acclaimed by whom?
2007-11-27 13:44:10 · answer #1 · answered by geni 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually they were "acclaimed" by me. They are my words that he twisted all around.
Here's the link. You can look at the times too. He's just an arrogant little jerk warring with me
Here's the link:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AgbZ.l2zZfpmQ_sUqn7Bjofsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20071127161535AAed0WU
PLAGARISM!
2007-11-27 21:50:50 · answer #2 · answered by Chara Pointshot 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They brought a smile to my face, especially the one with the bejeweled midnight animals bouncing on your lung. That was hilarious!
2007-11-27 21:45:28 · answer #3 · answered by iamnoone 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Whatever happened to the spaghetti-monster? Oh he's gone Buddhist.
The poem sucked though.
2007-11-27 21:51:59 · answer #4 · answered by carl 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
They make as much sense as life.
But they're great.
2007-11-27 21:44:12 · answer #5 · answered by Windona 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋