Come now, children....
Read about Her!
Scientism's Lovely Queen!
She explodes!....A Cloud of Gases....
Textbook Flatulence Pristine!
Yes, The Goddess has erupted...
Then with No Design in Mind,
Life appeared!
A Magik Wonder!
What a Scientific Find!
No Intelligence was needed...
"Science" waved her Magik Stick!
What religion?
....Man, who needs it!
When She turns her Magik Trick!
Power Priests of Scientessa
Have convinced us that it's TRUE!
Pompous, Mindless Gas from Nowhere
Evolved into me and you!
Trust us......This is NOT religion!
(It's "The Science Paradigm"... )
Gas appeared from out of Nowhere
Making Matter, Space and Time.
That's The Truth!
The Firm Foundation.
On this Magik Rock we'll stand!
It's The Mandatory Lesson:
Viruses becoming....Man!
Take The Message to the masses...
Sow The Seed both far and wide!
Goddess Prestidigitation
Takes us to King Darwin's side!
Now The High Court's in agreement...
Son, we can't allow debate!
Take your superstitions elsewhere
Trust The Queen's Most Gaseous State!
2007-11-26 10:48:46 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
That poem takes some serious liberties with the big bang theory, the nebular hypothesis, and the theory of evolution. I wonder if that's covered under poetic license.
2007-11-26 10:52:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poetically, not bad, but the content is strange, a bunch of "pompous, mindless gas."
2007-11-26 10:57:51 · answer #2 · answered by Petrushka's Ghost 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you have problems regarding evolution, posit them in the science area.
Posting this in R&S makes you look foolish and reeks of intellectual dishonesty.
It is painfully evident that your problem with evolution isn’t the process itself but that it clashes with your ideology; thus, your search for answers is stifled before the question even leaves your lips.
2007-11-26 10:53:25 · answer #3 · answered by mam2121 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
There are better. Look up "Darwinity." It rhymes and scans much better, it's much more literate and witty.
2007-11-26 10:58:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lots of spelling errors...was this written by a christian? had to be someone without education. i thought it was good for a 2nd grade level. pretty poor for an adult
2007-11-26 10:52:23 · answer #5 · answered by Jeff S Phoenix_AM 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I suppose you did the best you could.
D plus.
2007-11-26 10:55:53 · answer #6 · answered by Hera Sent Me 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You spelt magic wrong.
2007-11-26 10:53:28 · answer #7 · answered by Ode to the Damned® ÆA NR 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
what does this have to do with religion?
2007-11-26 10:52:21 · answer #8 · answered by grandfather raven 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
could have been beter.
2007-11-26 11:45:02 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
HORSE- PUCKY!!!
2007-11-26 10:55:11 · answer #10 · answered by army_sister71 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋