Can you just look this over ? I'm writing for my school's news paper. Tell me what needs to go in or out

Question

Hooking up, as defined by UrbanDictionary.com, suggests kissing someone else or sleeping together. In general, this term has branched into an array of meanings, from kissing in the park to full on sex. But the line, especially in high school, has to be drawn. But where?
At parties, the most common type of hook up occurs—no string attached. With a night of fun, the couple, or group, returns to life and never speaks of anything ever again. Ever. The deed has bee done and the session is complete. Many times hooking up goes hand in hand with intoxication and other illegal practices.
The other common type of hooking up involves a no-strings attached relationship. The two involved agree on being “friends with benefits” and they do not become entangled in a formal relationship, only get with each other on occasion to satisfy their physical needs. For the most part, they are a couple but not official. For the benefit of other students, it’s best to think of them in a “common-law relationship

Answer 1

Line 4 should read " The line, expecially in high school,..." You have put the "but" in the next sentence. There is no need for the "but" in that sentence too.

Line 8, take the last "Ever." out, and line nine should be "been" instead of "bee".

Answer 2

thanks for definition as never looked up myself. thought was a slang term for get together with . pardon my slang as i'm lazy sometimes to look up words so don't bother and still use them as i guessed what they mean't.