my love your voice is music to my ear,
hoping one day soon my heartbeat you will hear,
my love your eyes is a door to the soul,
one day maybe i will make you whole,
my love your thoughts are mine,
someday if i have you in my life i will be devine!
wat do u think to needy or bad do u like it?u can say anything i wont mind...not to hurtful please!
2007-11-22 17:58:02 · 5 answers · asked by samantha 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
these is very nice I love it you have a great talent
2007-11-22 19:07:33 · answer #1 · answered by CP 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice thoughts!!!!
"I am hoping one day my heartbeat you'll hear."
"My love, your eyes open the door to my soul,"
"Maybe one day, you will make my life whole"
"My love, your thoughts, feel so much like mine,"
"With you in my life, it would be so devine!"
Try replacing your lines #1,3, 4, 5 And 6 with the above, and use your commas, periods, and capital letters. See what you think?
Try making it a bit longer, and more interesting. (Include some of the reasons why you feel that way)
2007-11-22 18:16:30 · answer #2 · answered by PEGGY S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
flirty and teasy is all leaving the recepient wishful thinking as u hoped while you're lol
2007-11-22 19:34:54 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey ..i like this..u have some one in your life with hope...that"s good ..Good luck
2007-11-23 04:44:58 · answer #4 · answered by Tehseen B 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sammi, this is pretty good but who are you talking about?
You sound like your sister.
2007-11-22 18:08:43 · answer #5 · answered by BILL 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋