which one is correct English?

Question

which one is a correct sentence ?
If i buy a cell phone without a plan from here,
if i but a cell phone from here, without a plan.

here : Rogers Service company ( it's like Verizon, and AT&T in Canada)

okay umm.. i lost my cell phone a few days ago, so I tried to buy a cell phone from Rogers company. even though I used another company's service, named Fido.
so the complete sentence should be like
" if i buy a cell phone from here without a plan, can I use the phone in fido service?"

Answer 1

I agree with the user who said to use you rather than here.

On a more grammatical level, it's better to say "cell phone without a plan" because "without a plan" is an adjectival phrase, modifying "cell phone" whereas the "from here" is an adverbial phrase modifying "buy". Generally, adverbs can be farther from their verbs than adjectives can from their nouns.

On a pragmatic level, if this is a real situation, you're better off asking Fido what cell phones work on their network than asking Rogers.

Answer 2

Can I buy just a cell phone from you, without a plan, and then use it with my Fido service?
Or:
I lost my cell phone. Can I buy a new cell phone from you, and use it with my Fido service?

I think that is what you are wanting to say. I think you are better off saying "you" rather than "here." The word "you" in English is a little different from many languages. It doesn't just mean a person, it can me "your company" and similar things also.

Answer 3

Neither is a sentence, but I would go with the second one.

ex. If I buy a cell phone from here, without a plan, it will be cheaper.

Hope this helps!

Answer 4

Neither:

I have not seen a cell phone that had a plan. They generally don't think about that.

You are unlikely to but a cell phone at any time. Even if you did, the comma placement makes no sense.

Answer 5

Neither one. Can you clarify what exactly you are trying to ask? Maybe you are trying to ask if you can buy a cell phone from that company without signing up for a plan?

Answer 6

Neither one makes any sense as a sentence.

Answer 7

Both are incomplete sentences.

Answer 8

the first one i would say but you hav to finish the sentance