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Tis 11 yr old girl, named lily. She was kidnapped when she was 6 by an evil(i guess u could call it that) man named paul who fell in love with her virgin mother, named emily. He erases her memories and when commanded kills her mother.
A year later, he raised her. He becomes cruel to others if his servants dont meet his expectations, if he has no use for someone he kills them. He treats Lily cruelly, but compared to Paul's other servants, it was alot less. But despite the cruely, she actually shows alot of affection for him. She calls him her master. She loves him quite alot. She does everything Paul says without arguing. Much like a dog. But Paul seems to be very indifferent to her affection.

Paul calls her, his pet. his toy, weapon etc. He explois her to kill innocent people with her telekinesis. She is much like a dog.(makes sense?) She do anything to please him.

After that Paul was arrested, I forgot da charge. Then Lily was taken.

2007-11-21 04:14:51 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pregnancy & Parenting Grade-Schooler

Any virgin can be a mother

FROM ADOPTION.

Artificial insemination as well.

And shes not in lve with him. She loves him like a father. She doesnt remember being kidnapped.

2007-11-21 04:22:14 · update #1

16 answers

No but it does sound like you made it up

2007-11-22 13:31:34 · answer #1 · answered by minniefron 2 · 0 0

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2016-11-12 07:51:34 · answer #2 · answered by tamala 4 · 0 0

This was probably not a good location for this ?
The story needs some tweaking & yes it would be abusive on several levels.
If you need the info on abuse check domestic abuse help websites & they will give you the deffinitions to help guide you.
I see these ? in Art & literature & happily answer them. You would have a more receptive audience there.
This story line is currently used by the author Christine Feehan. It's the Mind Game series.
Good luck in your writing.

2007-11-21 04:27:05 · answer #3 · answered by Nice one 5 · 0 1

This is a very confusing story. Yes, there is some abuse. Even if this girl was his "weapon", he had no right to hurt her if he was mad. She is completely innocent. She may have killed her mother but that is not her fault. The government wouldn't think that though.

2007-11-21 04:23:04 · answer #4 · answered by Clay S 1 · 0 2

it's proven telekinesis doesn't work at all

my opinions

him- really cruel (also false)

girl-really stupid (also false)

if this is a storyline for a book don't write it


yes that is abuse

2007-11-21 10:43:21 · answer #5 · answered by Fain 4 · 0 0

interesting story. You have a lot of time on your hands

2007-11-21 05:13:05 · answer #6 · answered by Ari Came On 4/4/09 2 · 0 0

So maybe this guy has kidnapped a REAL LITTLE GIRL,and has raised her like his daughter,made her kill her mother when she was little and now he is wondering if he has damaged her head?UHHHHH YES! LMAO,I dont even know what I just said let alone wtf he wrote!!!!

2007-11-21 04:46:03 · answer #7 · answered by oamnagr 1 · 0 1

No and this is a question of fiction. how can emily be a virgin if she is the mother of lilly

2007-11-21 04:18:08 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 3 2

Nice story.

2007-11-21 04:19:20 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

If you sell this story to Harlequin they will make a novel about it.

2007-11-21 04:24:25 · answer #10 · answered by Diane M 7 · 0 2

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