I tried to translate a text into Engish - can you check it for an errors -2?

Question

The World history by quotes of pupils

The Egyptians built their pyramid in the shape of the giantic triangled cubes
Actually Homer's poems has been written not by Homer but by another man with the same name
Socrat was a ancient greek scientist who walked and advised to the people. They killed him
At the time of the Olympic games the greeks ran and trhew a diskettus
????The Great Charta???? guaranteed that no one of the free men can be executed by hanging twice for a one crime
His death was awful. He was absent out with ????ээээ....????
The Queen Elizabet was a virgin. But she was popular as the Queen
The English fleet destroyed the Spanish Armadilla
Shakespeare wrote a comedies, tragedies and errors. Also he wrote a literature
Milton wrote "The Lost Paradise". Then his wife died and he wrote "The Found Paradise"
Lincoln wore only a silk cylinder hat when he was a president
The 14th amendment gave a right of citizenship for ex-******

Answer 1

I believe these sentences were originally in English, but with plenty of errors, so I'm not sure exactly, but I'll try:
The Egyptians built their pyramids in the shape of triangulAR cubes. [this is funny because a cube isn't triangular]
Actually Homer's poems WERE WRITTEN not by Homer but by another man with the same name.
SOCRATES was an ancient Greek scientist who walked [AROUND] and TAUGHT the people. They killed him.
At the time of the Olympic Games the Greeks ran [RACES] and threw a diskettus. [ha ha, confusion between the discus of discus throwing, and the diskette of the computer]
Queen Elizabeth was a virgin, but she was popular as a queen.
The English fleet destroyed the Spanish Armadilla. [meaning Armada; armadillo is an animal.]
Shakespeare wrote a comedies, tragedies and errors. Also he wrote literature
Milton wrote "PARADISE LOST." Then his wife died and he wrote "PARADISE REGAINED."
Lincoln wore only a silk TOP hat when he was a president. [the cylinder shaped hat is called a top hat in English. But Lincloln also wore clothes!]
The 14th amendment gave a right of citizenship for ex-NEGROES. [It means "ex-slaves." "*****" means a black person, and the black people did not change their race when they became free!]

Answer 2

The Egyptians built their pyramids in the shape of gigantic triangles with a 3-D effect. Actually, Homer's poems weren't written by Homer, but by another man with the same name. Socrat was an ancient Greek scientist who walked and gave advice to people. They killed him. At the time of the Olympic games, the Greeks ran and threw disks.

????The Great Charta???? guaranteed that none of the free men can be hanged twice for one crime.
His death was awful. He was absent out with ????ээээ....????
Queen Elizabeth was a virgin. But, she was popular as the Queen. The English fleet destroyed the Spanish Armadilla.

Shakespeare wrote comedies, tragedies and errors. Also, he wrote literature.

Milton wrote "The Lost Paradise". Then, his wife died and he wrote "The Found Paradise".

Lincoln wore only a silk cylinder hat when he was a president.

The 14th amendment gave citizenship to Americans

Answer 3

1. The Egyptians built the Pyramids in the shape of pyramids.
2. Actually Homer's poems were not written by Homer, but by another man with the same name.
3. Socrates was an ancient Greek scientist who walked and advised the people. They killed him.
4. At the time of the Olympic games, the Greeks ran and threw a discus.
5. The Magna Carta (I think), guaranteed that no free men could be tried for the same crime twice.
6. ??????
7. Elizabeth I was called the Virgin Queen and was popular.
8. The English fleet destroyed the Spanish Armada.
9. Shakespeare worte comedies, tragedies and errors, as well as literature.
10. Milton wrote "Paradise Lost." When his wife died, he wrote "Paradise Found."
11. Lincoln wore a silk stovepipe hat when he was president.
12 The 14th amendment gave citizenship to ex-slaves.

Answer 4

World history by quotes of pupils

The Egyptians built their pyramid in the shape of giGantic triangled cubes

Actually, Homer's poems haVE been written ,not by Homer, but by another man with the same name
SocratES was aN ancient Greek scientist who walked and advised the people. They killed him
At the time of the Olympic games the Greeks ran and tHRew a disCUS

The Great Charter guaranteed that no free man could be executed by hanging twice for one crime

His death was awful. He was absent out with ?

Queen Elizabeth was a virgin. But, she was popular as the Queen.
The English fleet destroyed the Spanish armada.
Shakespeare wrote comedies, tragedies and errors. Also he wrote literature
Milton wrote "The Lost Paradise". Then his wife died and he wrote "The Found Paradise"
Lincoln wore only a silk cylinder hat when he was a president.
The 14th amendment gave right of citizenship for ex-******

Pretty good just some spelling mistakes, and extra words.

Answer 5

The Egyptians built their pyramid in the shape of the giantic triangled cubes
Actually Homer's poems has been written not by Homer but by another man with the same name
Socrat was a ancient greek scientist who walked and advised to the people. They killed him
At the time of the Olympic games the greeks ran and threw a discus
????The Great Charta???? guaranteed that no one of the free men can be executed by hanging twice for a one crime
His death was awful. He was absent out with ????ээээ....????
The Queen Elizabet was a virgin. But she was popular as the Queen
The English fleet destroyed the Spanish Armarda
Shakespeare wrote a comedies, tragedies and errors. Also he wrote a literature
Milton wrote "The Lost Paradise". Then his wife died and he wrote "The Found Paradise"
Lincoln wore only a silk cylinder hat when he was a president
The 14th amendment gave a right of citizenship for ex-******

didnt quite no what you meant so i just corrected the mistakes :P

Answer 6

1) of giant triangle cubes
2) Actually, Homer's poems were not written by Homer, but by ...
3) Socrates was an ancient Greek who walked about and adviced the people.
4) The Greeks ran and threw the discus at the times of the Olympic Games.
5) The Great Charta guaranteed that no accused man could be tried twice for the same crime.
6) Queen Elizabeth was a virgin, but she was a popular queen.
7) The English fleet destroyed the Spanish armada.
8) Shakespeare wrote comedies and tragedies and literature.
9) The 14th Ammendment gave ex-slave ****** the right to citizenship.

Answer 7

Actually Homer's poems have been written not by Homer but by another man with the same name

Answer 8

Huh? What planet are you from?

Wotan

Answer 9

threw disces
Elisabeth