I want to put a really romantic message inside my boyfriends (22nd) birthday card. We have been together for over a year and a VERY serious and VERY in love. We plan to spend the rest of our lives together. So please can you help me put together a nice little loving passage to put inside this card, but using all/some of the following lines somewhere in there:
You make me so happy
I love the way you look at me
You make me feel so loved just by holding my hand
Feel free to alter some. Feel free to add as many lines fo your own as possible. If you don't want to work with what i've given you, please could you just give me some loving lines you mak up yourself.
Thanks!
2007-11-18 23:30:53 · 12 answers · asked by cassy 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
honestly - uve just done it yourself! put exactly what you wrote, he will know that it came from your heart and it does sound beautiful just as it is. if you used a verse someone else has written you, even if it does sum up how you feel, when you write it down i think you'll find it sounds false as its not what you would have said to him yourself
2007-11-19 00:28:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The life that I have
Is all that I have
And the life that I have is yours
The love that I have
For the life that I have
Is yours and yours and yours
I never wrote it but it has to be the most romantic pieces of poetry that I've read.
Theres more but the rest does'nt apply to you
2007-11-18 23:40:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i do not comprehend this line: "a guy who would not shave, yet isn't afraid to be hard around the aspects" If he would not shave, would not he be hard around the aspects? it type of sounds like that would want to favor to be "and," no longer "yet." So curiously like you gave no concept to kind. you in basic terms wrote what you had to say, and notwithstanding it regarded like or gave the impression of did not count number number. properly, kind is what distinguishes poetry from different styles of literature, so in case you extremely favor to be a poet, i imagine you ought to absolutely artwork in this section. also, it would not harm to make your poems better than only a itemizing of issues.
2016-10-24 11:42:02 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I love the way you kiss me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.
I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
And the way you're always there.
I love the way you touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And glad that you are mine.
2007-11-19 00:11:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No offense but i'm sure the whole point of you expressing yourself in a poem is to tel your b:f what you think about him. surely it defeats the object if you ask someone else to write it for you.
2007-11-18 23:34:34 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't rhyme or anything but I'm proud of it :D
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.
2007-11-18 23:35:58 · answer #6 · answered by Diego 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Yes. Women are inferior to men, but I can still love porn and tacos.
2007-11-18 23:41:15 · answer #7 · answered by Psychotic Clown 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its fine the way it is and coming from you to him makes it special so you should leave it ...
2007-11-18 23:35:40 · answer #8 · answered by boscowood 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The words should come from YOUR heart. They would mean so much more.
2007-11-18 23:34:04 · answer #9 · answered by PEGGY S 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think what you've already wrote is beautiful, short an sweet but perfect, seriously you dont need to write a novel to tell him how u feel : )
2007-11-18 23:35:51 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋