The trees bow, the wind curtsies
In an eternal dance
In the depths of the ocean, tiny cells divide
In the reaches of space, great stars collide
Some would call it "Chance"
The sea roars, and birds sing
There's a rhythm and a rhyme
Life is a struggle, and all must die
But there, in the stillness, a baby's cry
Everything in its time
From great galaxies to tiny atoms
There is a Grand Design
For God so loved His Great Creation
That He sent His Son for our salvation
A Light forever to shine
Comments/opinions please?
2007-11-18 11:20:10 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
that's beautiful.
2007-11-18 11:25:10 · answer #1 · answered by sisterzeal 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty poem there a cell on www.tbn.org. a story about a spinning tail designed like a motorboat ect perfect in its need to move in fluid its design check it out its good luv dad
2007-11-19 08:33:27 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is the R/S section. It is not the appropriate place for a poem critique. Post in the poetry section.
2007-11-19 01:51:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You were on to something until Grand Design.
2007-11-18 19:37:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You do know that these poems are a violation of the TOS? Follow the rules.
2007-11-18 19:26:27 · answer #5 · answered by atheist 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You have just crossed over into THE TWILIGHT ZONE.
- Rod Serling
2007-11-18 19:26:40 · answer #6 · answered by mommanuke 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
God must love vacuum, helium, black holes, and incidentally, a mountain of dead dinosaurs.
2007-11-18 19:22:45 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
Why do you keep posting your poems? This isn't a blog.
2007-11-18 19:22:44 · answer #8 · answered by 雅威的烤面包机 6 · 3⤊ 2⤋
What is the question?
2007-11-18 19:23:30 · answer #9 · answered by Celtickarma 4 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Nice, but that's about it.
2007-11-18 19:25:13 · answer #10 · answered by punch 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋