Women question. What do you think is wrong with my men looking for women add what should I do different?

Question

Looking for a healthy mind and body, kind-hearted, level headed and intelligent woman. Looking to share loves of life. It might be fun to go to a comedy club , and some museums. I'm a man 6'1" 165lbs and have blue eyes, shaved head, single, no kids.... I'm a down to earth, honest, caring, good with kids. I enjoy cards, board games, open to trying something new. I cook non fancy foods regulary, I do eat out but not much. This is important to me:I would love spending time with you outdoors rain/shine, night/day, cycling on/off road, hiking, disc golf, swimming, etc. Also enjoy relaxing and enjoying a good tv show, or book. I also enjoy giving and receiving a good massage(I used to do it professionally) .
I HATE smoking and I am not religious. I believe in being a positive influence on society.
I do have some conservitive views such as people being responsible for themselves, I am not always politically correct.
Lets have some real communication.
Thank you for your time and wisdom!

I am 44. I mention religion because it is important and I do not want to lead anyone on, or waste our time. Should I really not say much? What should I say? I just do not want to waste time mine or hers.

Answer 1

First of all it's too long! Too much detail and I am getting dizzy reading all the things that you would like to do. You don't sound down to earth at all. Change it. Keep it simple. Good luck!

Answer 2

Well you pretty much covered everything that would be important for a women to know. I would take out the real communication part (isn't all communication real?) anyway it's a turn off. Saying you are not religious could be a red flag for some ( you know the old saying, don't talk religion or politics) and then there is the massage thing, maybe you should keep that a secret till you get to use it.
Anyway those are my thoughts.

Answer 3

the misspellings and grammatical errors would be a big turnoff to me (i guess i expect an educated guy to proofread his personal ad). you list way too many things. make it a lot shorter. why do you shave your head, i would certainly wonder about that. the organization of the ad tells me you haven't really structured your thinking much. try to organize your thoughts a bit and it might help to mention your financial stability and job situation - ie financially secure andpossibly your age.