Spanish proofreading?

Question

Soy una chica. Tengo quince anos. Mi cumpleanos es el tres de junio. Tengo pelo rubio y largo y ojos verdes. Vivo en una casa. No me gusta correr. Soy simpatica. Mi madre es comica. Es no aburrida. Mi madre tiene trenta y cinco anos. Ellas tiene pelo castano tambien. Ellas son jovenes. Tienen nueve anos y cuatro anos. Son muy divertidas, intelligentes, y bonitas.

Please tell me if it all agrees grammatically and if the spelling is correct. I wasn't sure about the sentence where I am telling my sisters' ages, but I had to use tienen in my paragraph. Also, if someone could tell me how to add accents it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Answer 1

For the most part the grammar is correct. When you say "es no aburrida"... I'm not sure if you are referring to your mother or not. If you are trying to say your mom isn't borring it would be "ella no es aburrida".

Oh, it is "treinta" and not "trenta" that could just be a typo...and one person said the last "son" should be "soy"...if you are talking about your sisters or girls you are correct in using "son" and not "soy"

After you tell how old your mom is you start talking about "ellas". I'm not sure who you are referring to. If you are referring to your mother again then it should be "ella" not "ellas". If you are talking about your sisters (which is what I think you are doing) you have to mention they are your sisters. The first time you say "ellas" you might want to say "mis hermanas tienen pelo castanos tambien."

For that sentence it does have to be "tienen" and not "tiene" because your subject is plural. I would rewrite it like this (assuming that my assumptions were correct)

Soy una chica. Tengo quince años. Mi cumpleaños es el tres de junio. Tengo pelo rubio y largo y ojos verdes. Vivo en una casa. No me gusta correr. Soy simpatica. Mi madre es cómica. Ella no es aburrida. Mi madre tiene treinta y cinco años. Mis hermanas tienen pelo castaños tambien. Ellas son jóvenes. Una hermana tiene nueve anos y mi otra hermana tiene cuatro años. Son muy divertidas, intelligentes, y bonitas.

That's what I would do. I'm in Spanish IV. I didn't change much because it was almost perfect as it was.

Answer 2

Hi xoquincyxo,

Here:

Soy una chica. Tengo quince AñOS. Mi cumpleAñOS es el tres de junio. Tengo pelo rubio largo y ojos verdes. Vivo en una casa. No me gusta correr. Soy simpÁtica. Mi madre es DIVERTIDA, ella NO ES nada aburrida. Mi madre tiene treInta y cinco AñOS. MIS HERMANAS tieneN pelo castAño tambiÉn. Ellas son jÓvenes. Tienen nueve Y CUATRO Años. Son muy divertidas, intelligentes y bonitas.

Different parts of the paragraph don't flow very well. Try expanding/commenting more on the ideas you have included.
To add accents, set your keyboard to United States-International.
1.For the 'ñ', hold the right Alt key down and type 'n'
2.For accented vowels, hold the right Alt key down and type the vowel you need.

Answer 3

There a few mistakes here. The patches for these are
in caps below:

Soy una chica. Tengo quince anos. Mi cumpleanos es el tres de junio. Tengo pelo rubio y largo y ojos verdes. Vivo en una casa. No me gusta correr. Soy simpática. Mi madre es GRACIOSA. NO ES aburrida. Mi madre tiene treInta y cinco años. MIS HERMANAS tieneN pelo castaño también. Ellas son jovenes. Tienen nueve y cuatro años. Son muy divertidas, intelligentes, y bonitas.

Quite well done, really! For "funny", cómico(a)
means somewhat clownish, so I used the word
gracioso(a) instead.
Here's how to add accents: Assuming you have
a Windows machine,
Set your keyboard to United States-International.
If you want to make an accented vowel, hold
the right alt key down and type the letter you want.
For the ñ, hold the right alt key down and type n.
For ¿, hold the right alt key down and type ?
For ¡ hold the right alt key down and type 1.
Hope that helps! ¡Buena suerte!

Answer 4

you have some senteces separate, without continuity. some to them are bad. maybe if I write again you can change the mistakes.
The first problem is the "ñ" you computer not have this simbol, but you can use ASCII number to write correct, becaus ano it's different to año. really ano means anus, You understand to me, any that read that can to laught about it.
It's a homework? because, the sentences are different and not have contitnuity.
Soy una chica y tengo quince años, mi cumpleaños es el 3 de junio. Mi pelo es rubio, largo y tengo ojos verdes. Vivo en una casa. No me gusta correr, Soy una persona agradable. Mi madre es simática y nada aburrida. Ella tiene 35 años. Su pelo es castaño. (in this moment you begin to speak about some other peoples, but you never say who are them) Ellas son jóvenes, una tiene 9 años y la otra 4; son divertidas, inteligentes y bonitas.

why not write the information in English and then is easier to help you. Only hope that my translaltion help to you.

It's not comun to use comica because this word it's for clowns or comics friend, your mother can be nice, (agradable), sympathétic, (agradable), friendly (amigable) never write about formal person comica.

Answer 5

Soy una chica. Tengo quince anos. Mi cumpleaños es el tres de junio. Tengo pelo rubio, largo y ojos verdes. Vivo en una casa. No me gusta correr. Soy simpatica. Mi madre es cómica. No es aburrida. Mi madre tiene treinta y cinco anos. Ellas tiene pelo castaño tambien. Ellas son jóvenes. Tienen nueve años y cuatro años. Son muy divertidas, intelligentes, y bonitas.

I did it!

Answer 6

Change the last "son" to "soy" and other than that, great job! I give you an A! lol ^_^

Hmm... if you're using the microsoft word program, you can add accents by going to "insert" then "symbols". Look around until you find the letters with accents...
Seems there should be an easier way... Alt+168 = ¿, if that helps at all... ^_^
Best of luck. ^^

Answer 7

El nunca tenía un nombre, pero todos le/lo llamaban "Perro". Perro no tenía un reloj, pero siempre sabía qué hora era, y sabía el día que el tren número quince paró a l. a. estación. He in no way had a popularity, yet each and every person referred to as him "Perro." Perro did not have a watch, yet he consistently knew what time it became, and he knew the day that practice No. 15 stopped on the station. Harleigh Kyson Jr.

Answer 8

From what I can tell, it looks pretty good.

And for the accents, make sure your "num lock" is on and you need to know the ASCII code and its 164.

To write an ñ press and hold the ALT key. While holding down the ALT key, enter the 3-digit decimal code(164) for the extended ASCII character you want to generate.

Answer 9

when using Microsoft Word, you hold down the ' and then type the letter.. something like that.. and for that squiggly on the n look under symbols.

Answer 10

Great job:)