I really like the mood of the pic. It's dark, I don't think you need more light. I like the vignette and texture, they give it a somber feeling. Maybe try it at a sharper angle.
Looks like it could be used for documentary or photo-journalism. It says to me "This guy served YOU. And know he is happily existing somewhere."
2007-11-15 06:14:29
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answered by emilysk8 3
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It's very semetrical and the texture is calm, but it's almost too simple. I don't understand what you are trying to portray. I feel like, because of the angle it's not supposed to be peaceful. To me it feels like a tribute. Something that says, "hey remember World War II."
I think you should have added somthing that insunuated, hey WWII was bad or WWII hurt me personally. The photo just doesn't speak. It needs to speak.
2007-11-15 19:08:18
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answered by sa_da_sa07 2
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Great Photos . I love them. For just using a point and shoot camera, those are some great photos. Keep at it and save up for a DSLR. You have a good eye.
2007-11-15 16:16:46
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answered by Kimiko 2
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If you like it the way it is, then I say there is nothing to change.
However, for my taste and preference...it's too dark. I'd like to have seen more to the white side. This would give it a bit more contrast and pop more.
For the mood. maybe throw in a bit of sepia tone...but not a lot.
2007-11-16 09:28:40
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answered by gryphon1911 6
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So you have photographed something someone else created. I see nothing unusual in your photographing of this item. You have other work that is much better and more creative in your portfolio.
2007-11-15 20:50:23
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answered by Perki88 7
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Pretty good, but I think you over edit them a little. You're losing a lot of detail in many of them.
2007-11-15 14:48:55
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answered by Cleo 2
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Pretty good.
Create a good title for your picture. Make sure it attracts the viewer's attention.
2007-11-15 12:19:29
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answered by L.E. 6
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I think it's great the way it is, i really like the composition and the mood in it !!!
2007-11-15 20:02:53
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answered by A 5
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U can use some more light.
2007-11-15 13:26:18
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answered by art@art 4
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