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How do I make it better?

I'm 15 and shoot with a Canon A540 (point and shoot camera)

http://www.flickr.com/photos/dannysphotography/1992970893/

2007-11-15 04:12:23 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Visual Arts Photography

9 answers

I really like the mood of the pic. It's dark, I don't think you need more light. I like the vignette and texture, they give it a somber feeling. Maybe try it at a sharper angle.

Looks like it could be used for documentary or photo-journalism. It says to me "This guy served YOU. And know he is happily existing somewhere."

2007-11-15 06:14:29 · answer #1 · answered by emilysk8 3 · 0 0

It's very semetrical and the texture is calm, but it's almost too simple. I don't understand what you are trying to portray. I feel like, because of the angle it's not supposed to be peaceful. To me it feels like a tribute. Something that says, "hey remember World War II."

I think you should have added somthing that insunuated, hey WWII was bad or WWII hurt me personally. The photo just doesn't speak. It needs to speak.

2007-11-15 19:08:18 · answer #2 · answered by sa_da_sa07 2 · 0 0

Great Photos . I love them. For just using a point and shoot camera, those are some great photos. Keep at it and save up for a DSLR. You have a good eye.

2007-11-15 16:16:46 · answer #3 · answered by Kimiko 2 · 0 0

If you like it the way it is, then I say there is nothing to change.

However, for my taste and preference...it's too dark. I'd like to have seen more to the white side. This would give it a bit more contrast and pop more.
For the mood. maybe throw in a bit of sepia tone...but not a lot.

2007-11-16 09:28:40 · answer #4 · answered by gryphon1911 6 · 0 0

So you have photographed something someone else created. I see nothing unusual in your photographing of this item. You have other work that is much better and more creative in your portfolio.

2007-11-15 20:50:23 · answer #5 · answered by Perki88 7 · 0 0

Pretty good, but I think you over edit them a little. You're losing a lot of detail in many of them.

2007-11-15 14:48:55 · answer #6 · answered by Cleo 2 · 0 0

Pretty good.

Create a good title for your picture. Make sure it attracts the viewer's attention.

2007-11-15 12:19:29 · answer #7 · answered by L.E. 6 · 0 0

I think it's great the way it is, i really like the composition and the mood in it !!!

2007-11-15 20:02:53 · answer #8 · answered by A 5 · 1 0

U can use some more light.

2007-11-15 13:26:18 · answer #9 · answered by art@art 4 · 0 0

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