No posse ho
so tonight i feel i've shared my wisest words
is that enough so i can go?
i've taught some really valuable accords
can i go now? my soul needs it so
stepping back to my humble abode
i cannot help but smile and pray to know
what sets them apart from the other horde?
A heart , that sees no posse ho.
2007-11-14 12:31:33 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
@Noah
hahaha =P
2007-11-14 14:25:48 · update #1
No, I don't want to laugh at all (I just love the way you always apologize for everything you do: much nicer to read than all those people who are so sure of themselves).
Reading it aloud, as usual, I only find that line 4 has less of this regular, lilting rhythm. But I could not tell you why.
Keep up the good work.
xxx
2007-11-14 18:57:15 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
ALL your poems are set apart from the horde of those who have no ability. Need for coffee or not, when you write, others listen. I love the alternating rhyme of this poem; sometimes I think you should have your poetry set to music.
2007-11-15 11:22:06 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I agree it seems totally unorganized. But if it came from you than I would say it a great accomplishment with or without the coffee. See if I could create that right now. ERRRROOF!
2007-11-15 00:55:45 · answer #3 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Uh, it has good words in it, I can tell you did it real quickly, drink some coffee, then use what you have and add to it, then it will kick behind
2007-11-14 22:21:24 · answer #4 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you need to drink less coffee.... But this is cool, even though it's messy, it sort of adds to it, yanno?
2007-11-15 12:08:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes, by all means, you've earned your rest.
2007-11-14 20:39:19 · answer #6 · answered by Mandy--relatively harmless 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
there's are some wise words here. i like this.
2007-11-15 07:48:53 · answer #7 · answered by Can't Stop Smiling 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's good doll. definitely no laughing.
2007-11-14 21:25:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
its good the way it is.~right to the point......
2007-11-14 21:55:08 · answer #9 · answered by Mary S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
of course you have. of course it does.
2007-11-14 21:28:21 · answer #10 · answered by weird child 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋