i just want to let it out , to let you know .
seems like it was yesterday that you were a part of my life.
i just want to go back to the start , to the beginning .
i want you to know that it feels like a part of me is missing ,
like a hole in my heart .
maybe i should move on , maybe i shouldn't fight but i've
convinced myself i can turn it around .
i don't want my heart to break because it hasn't been whole
since i left .
i fall and i have no one to pick me up and then when i think
i have gotten back up, pieces of memories fall to the ground .
i can barely hang on , broken glass cuts my heart inside .
sometimes i just want to hide because it's you i miss .
one minute im moving forward ,
and the next i find an excuse to look back .
so a day when ive lost myself completely ,
i go on by believing the future memories we'll share .
my world spins in slow motion, as your's is completely fine .
i don't understand why i can't move along ;
i just got to keep it strong .
2007-11-14 10:13:34 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
You use first person so often, it drags down the power of your lyrics.
Try to close your "I's" and write it in third person.
2007-11-14 10:16:40 · answer #1 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um who's it by and what's it called? Oh never mind. I don't listen to that popular stuff anyway. Go Metallica!
2007-11-14 18:20:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Aw, I like the lyrics. It's good! :-)
2007-11-14 18:17:09 · answer #3 · answered by Riah ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋