good poem or bad plz say?

Question

"See my grave?
See whom I scarred?
See the green papers:
Of wealth, that all adore?
Its where thou sittest
It where thou looketh.
Its a curse."

"Twas it began when I:
Met a woman.
I knew everything of her.
I robbed; I raped
I made a living out of this:
For many, many decades.

"She wasn't the only one
No...no not at all!
I made good money.
Just because others
Disobeyed their parents."



hint: i just made this in 10 min tell me plz how well i did

Answer 1

doesn't make much sense. kinda munching raw nuts by the graveside! lol
on second reflection, it sounds alright except the last stanza may need unpacking.
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Answer 2

Pretty good for 10 min!

Otherwise, it's not to my liking because of all the "bad" stuff it talks about.

Answer 3

i dunno the whole plot of the poem. usually they have a feeling and you can feel the shivers up your spine or maybe a sense of emotion but reading this i felt nothing sorry!