sinrksntoltnxfridiyntg "kay' tncoosntobtxl "bay' fbzruyynflvuwcgesy"hay" nbjvyocnsjrbdr"lay" vnidjsuvutndynispj"pay bdhyobstrklf"day" jdnxbypdhusveyt"ray" nfiryzdropjl"play" tjvsutpjldgcnue"gay" l fnudysvoypjsr"way"
2007-11-13 12:02:48 · 26 answers · asked by fatstan@sbcglobal.net 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
That is the most beautiful poem I've ever read. It puts Shakespeare's sonnets to shame. Well DONE.
2007-11-13 12:20:05 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well I have to tell you that I think that kay, bay, hay, lay, pay, day, ray, play, gay, and way all rime. I guess that's a good things. The rest what can I say didn't understand a word of it. So can't judge it.
2007-11-13 20:07:16 · answer #2 · answered by donnalw3 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm partial to
fbzruyynflvuwcgesy"hay" nbjvyocnsjrbdr"lay"
There's nothing like a good roll in the hay with a willing member of the opposite sex. Good stuff.
2007-11-13 20:14:11 · answer #3 · answered by pm 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's deep and beautiful. I love how abstract the thoughts are, and the imagery is just amazing.
the rhyming pattern is a little clliched though.
keep writing. :)
2007-11-13 20:10:52 · answer #4 · answered by jo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a Beastie Boys song... "Girls"
2007-11-13 20:05:36 · answer #5 · answered by Penny 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it rocks
my fav part is PAY bdhyobstrklf DAY
cuz i need pay day to get here quick
2007-11-13 20:05:39 · answer #6 · answered by woman38 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its so... Out of this world and strange. You must have some deep feelings...
2007-11-13 20:06:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very creative! I love it! One of a kind! ^_^
2007-11-13 20:05:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's interesting but i can't read it.
2007-11-13 20:07:16 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
shthryrhfididh urisopfdopam mnienjhfdlnfsij- okay!
2007-11-13 20:06:31 · answer #10 · answered by s01psb 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋