tell me what you think?

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Your smiling face
Now gone, with out a trace

I want you here so much
To hear your voice, to feel your touch

I don't know if your in heaven or hell
Nobody does, only God can tell

Not knowing where you are
Has left me with a gaping scar

You've been gone for six years
But the end of my pain does not grow near

As each year goes by
I think you will come back, I cannot lie

The pain is just way to deep
I want to have you here, to see, to keep

To tell you how much you broke my heart
I couldn't even begin to start

It feels like my heart has been taken away
There is not a price I would not pay

Just to see my family smile
without there being a missing tile

Without you our family photo is not complete
please come back Binny, I'll always repeat



this is another poem for my sister who died, except the middle part is for my sister who killed herself and the start is for the one that died (I was confused about my feelings at the time) i hope you follow.

Answer 1

I think the poem reflects very honestly your heartache and sorrow in coming to terms with these catastrophic losses, especially the sister who took her life. I'm so sorry. This certainly has to put a damper on the holiday season. May the Lord richly bless you and give you His peace that surpasses understanding.