on my knees
For so damn long, I decieved just myself,
Very few people knew the depths of my pain.
I'll take you there, but no one else may come along
You'll see the tears that I cry, when I'm all by my self.
I know that you have always been here
Just a matter of time, till you located my heart.
You are the one, I know that you care.
I have no doubt, that you will always be there.
I am never ashamed to express how I feel,
I love you now, above everything.
You are my future, my present, my past,
I know that you love me, the die has been cast.
So I cry out now, I need only you,
You make me pure, a man once again.
All of my life, I've tried and I've failed,
But I still got up and now you are real.
Everything I am, is because of my past,
The good and the bad, now I just wait.
I am now down on both of my knees,
Weeping for you, just as you cryed for me.
2007-11-13 09:07:40 · 10 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
This is a wonderful poem and it shows your on that road of hurt and sadness; and on to the road of happiness; and making it a full circle...keep writing ; as your really great at it....
2007-11-13 12:15:01 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've survived a few earthquakes in LA and I still have bad attitude
2016-05-23 01:06:46 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is a light at the end of the tunnel!
Spell check: deceived(i before e except after c),
cry, crys, but cried, not cryed.
Keep on truckin'
2007-11-13 09:52:56 · answer #3 · answered by thom t 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Oh my gawd, the age of Romanticism has returned to give one last puke! You are joking, right? You are mocking the style, right? I sure hope so. It does indicate, however, you took some literature classes. No future in that, hope you are born rich.
2007-11-13 09:18:09 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
..we all have those days,, where we want to share everything,, but we don't know how. so we retain everything,, keep it locked up and don't let it out untill we explode and brake down,, its a lesson i learned the hard way,, my solution now is writing. No one ever reads it they've promised not to, but it helps so much to let it all out,, even if its only written down.. who is she may i ask?? xoxo
2007-11-13 09:15:11 · answer #5 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Do I need to say again, Good Job. Ok, I will.
2007-11-13 10:03:27 · answer #6 · answered by Dondi 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Steve, this is so beautiful. It's truly amazing. And I hope that you know that I pray for you every night.
2007-11-13 09:13:24 · answer #7 · answered by Sali 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Great work. Keep it up.
2007-11-13 10:12:28 · answer #8 · answered by loretta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good. job. keep. writing.
:D
(if you are wondering why i am typing the way i am....email me.)
2007-11-13 09:10:50 · answer #9 · answered by *luna's lover* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poetry is so breath-taking i loved it
2007-11-13 09:52:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋