sometimes
Sometimes I feel I am stuck in a mire
Lost and forgotten, like someone's old tire.
I know it now, I should never give up
I may be a little old, yet I feel like a pup.
You are the one who gives me my hope
What was I thinking? God, what a dope.
A second chance is what cried for
You've given me that and quite a bit more.
I used to feel so bad I would cry
I really wished, that I'd just up and die.
But not anymore, I have love on my side
I might still choke, but I swallow my pride.
I feel the anguish down deep in my heart,
Whenever I think of the two of us apart.
I now have a chance, my feet hit the floor
My last little thought, I wonder what life has in store.
This is for someone very special who is attempting to change my view on life.
2007-11-13 07:42:14 · 4 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It;s a really sweet and good poem; and i;m glad your back and have a special friend to help get put all the sadness' and pain' a way again' for a while; as you deserve happiness' just like we all do,,,,,, your friend always shelly
2007-11-13 07:51:55 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so sweet!!! Anyone would be a fool not to appreciate your sentiments!!
Good luck.......
2007-11-13 15:53:10 · answer #2 · answered by FAITH 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
indeed it is very beautiful i just love it
2007-11-13 16:13:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
..attempting?? ..or has it worked?? xoxo
2007-11-13 16:48:23 · answer #4 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋