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Whispered words melt,
passing by, the thoughts
inside tumble
as you smile
Strands of hair part
as ears strains
to listen
Softly passing by,
they fall to your toes,
scattered, whispered words.
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2007-11-13 00:45:56 · 7 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It's nice and soft. Very soothing.
I am at work, but everything will be blocked tomorrow...
2007-11-13 02:22:52 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Tis poetry in motion. Nice meaning to it, TD. I could feel the thoughts you spoke of. Cool.
As to my life, I fell off course with many things, and was off course with some others, but am now on course with the largest part of my life, God.
2007-11-13 09:57:51 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes, i like it as much as i always like your other poems. But why do you have to ask so many questions today? Have you started on a new chapter? lol ***cruel kind of nagging, i know!***
I'm good today. I read Aristotle's "The Poetics" today. (not finished yet though...but i'm very proud of having a good start)
moon ;-)
2007-11-13 09:57:48 · answer #3 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Actually very beautiful.
And my life is in that delicate phase of being on course. It's not quite sturdy, but it's getting there.
2007-11-13 10:03:43 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nicely done. sounds like my life.. all the things I don't say... all the times I smile when I want to break down... At least, I'm not alone.
2007-11-13 08:49:16 · answer #5 · answered by JerZey 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
What falls on her toes? Is it her ears? What happened to her ears?
2007-11-13 09:24:01 · answer #6 · answered by insincere 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
You've got that right, and though it is really nice, it is too, too true.
My life's work is in shambles.....
2007-11-13 12:35:59 · answer #7 · answered by I Heart Holidays... 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋