Does your briliance become the written word of your poetry?

Question

What brilliance does my song desire?
To be the passion of my heart's fire
and ever on the tongues of those who read
bestow the truth that lingers by their breath.
My song is borne from passion's own desire
to be complete, as it were writ by fire,
reveals the nature of its destiny's decree,
becomes its word, the life was given it by me.
And promise of its light is what I want
upon the future of it glowing bright,
as never before it did, before it I did write,
the very soul of me entwined these words,
they sang themselves a song, became the verse,
for heart's are singing with the song I sang
and melodies ne'er heard before sprang
full and loud into their heart's a fire,
to be the one true wish of my desire.

Answer 1

Words tell a lot about the person`s intellectual capacity but how they are applied in the practical world is the best measure of one`s mind. There are people who know how to manipulate words but in reality don`t know how to apply them.

Yes, it does in your case. We have different perceptions, I would think mine is good enough but others might think it`s not.

Answer 2

Manifestations
one's created intentions
reflections of self.
Explained meaning of being
the cart is before the horse.

Identifying -
sucked into old behaviour
valuing the known.
Watching observer's reactions
clear view of what's going on.

Dividing apart
wholeness is no longer seen
we see what we want.
Identifed with nothingness
attraction no longer held.

Winter approaches
welcomed rest after Summer
outside chaos calmed.
Space between relationships
inward focus - source of growth.

Being - relating
expressing self to what turns up
growing - evolving.
Reflecting light through senses
seeing the stars in the sky.

~ Betsy ~

Answer 3

Expressing one's existence

A creator's existence consist in his creation
without manifesting himself he is pure being
but not yet reflected through his revelation
Lacking consciousness of his latent being
the creator needs revealing to exist fully

Light is not visible if it is not reflected
empty space doesn't contain any light
as source it can be seen in darkness
but it needs someone who observes
giving sight for light's full existence

Light reflected through the observer
watching what shows up within action
becoming aware of causes and oneself
recognising the source of light within
light is most essential to see - to grow

Creation is reflected through all being
from very basic level of manifestation
Although consciousness is reflected light
inbuilt evolution grows towards the whole
needing conscious form to reach further steps

Growing force is essential part of all duration
a hidden longing to unite with the initial creator
after a long dark way finally consciously reflected
through the whole spectrum of growing human forms
the One creator shows himself through his exposure

All is expression of the One visible through creation
with urge to express oneself - the way one is made
calling for recognition of one's present existence
being moved through a long road of evolution
to meet with the creator by finding oneself

Urge to express oneself finally vanishes
as well seeking and search for sense
expressing oneself by being alive
responding by reflecting light
mirror of creation in love

My words are said
as signs to meet
like a smile
floating
in air
O
BeiYin
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