need some help with my english?

Question

how do you write this sentence correct:

"i will apply his good qualities in my study by being courageus,
not givin' up at times of problems "

you get the idea. can you suggest a good full, proper sentence
if necessary please change the words.

Answer 1

I plan on applying the qualities I learned from him in my studies by persevering, even when things become difficult.

Answer 2

Of course, it needs to be in your words to catch your personality. The specific wording, however, is subject to various phrasing selections by you.

You wrote:
"i will apply his good qualities in my study by being courageous,
not giving' up at times of problems "

What about something like:
One might be tempted to ignore his good qualities when writing about ______ but I have attempted to employ the necessary courage for a fair assessment as one of the criteria in my final evaluation.

Or:
Writing about ______ in any positive manner requires the courage to seek out and recognize any qualities _______ might have that we might regard as being desirable, this in order to deliver a fair and reasoned judgment.

It would help if I knew the purpose of the sentence.

I did not read your sentence as you writing something difficult and needing the courage to finish inspired by some mentor; I read it as you writing about someone about whom it is difficult to be positive.

read it wrong, I like the responses by: kator, Lauren S and nhaijhel!

Answer 3

to guide me in my study, i'll apply his quality of perseverance by not giving up on challenges and problems.

Answer 4

In my pursuit of courage, I will replicate his best qualities by not giving up in times of hardship.