Could you please check if there is any grammatical errors in this sentence?

Question

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Dear Sir,

Thank you very much, we have got the visas for the three gentlemen from the Embassy thanks to your assistance.

Once again, thank you very much for your help.

Answer 1

The appropriate way to have worded your original question would have been:

"Could you please check and see if there are any grammatical errors in this sentence?"

And the changes that I would make to that paragraph below the original question are as follows:

"Dear Sir,

Thank you very much. We received the visas for the three gentlemen from the Embassy. Thank you for your assistance.

Once again, thank you very much for your help."

Answer 2

Dear Sir,

Thank you very much. We have received the visas for the three gentlemen from the embassy, thanks to your assistance. Thank you very much for your help.

Answer 3

Dear Sir or Madam:


I thank you very much.We have received the Visas for the three gentlemen from the Embassy thanks to your assistance.
Once again thank you very much for your help.

Sincerely Yours,

your name here

Answer 4

Dear Sir,

Thanks to your assistance,we have the visas for the three gentlemen from the Embassy.

Once again, thank you very much for your help.

This is how i would write it.

Answer 5

No grammar errors, but it could be better. Here's my slightly revised version:

Dear Sir,

Thank you very much, we have the visas for the three gentlemen from the Embassy, thanks to your assistance.

(Embassy should not be capitalized if it's not a proper noun).

Answer 6

There are two. The comma after "much" should be a period instead. The next sentence, starting with "we" should be capitalized as "We." You also should change "got" to a better word such as "received."

Answer 7

Period after much. Begin new sentence with 'Thanks to your assistance,' and then the rest of that sentence, ending with Embassy.